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IELTS WRITING TASK 1
The pie charts represent detailed differences in the share of some energy sources produced by a certain country in two different years, 1985 and 2003.
In general, it is clear that there had been little change in the two groups of resources where natural gas and coal had increased while oil and nuclear had decreased over that 18-year period. On the other hand, hydropower production did not seem to show any rise or drop.
As the graphs illustrate, coal and natural gas were produced by over 10% more in 2003 which stood at 23% and 22% compared to its figure in 1985 at 13% and 8%, respectively. At the same time, the trend of nuclear and oil energies was just the opposite, experiencing a slight decrease from 22% to only 8% for nuclear and from 52% to only 39% for oil. The only source that was produced at the exact same amount in both years is hydro, which made up 4%. Ultimately, the rest of the proportion was occupied by other renewable sources which experienced an increase from 1% to 4%.
181 words, Mr. Dion.
IELTS Writing Task 2
Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today.
Why might this be the case?
What problems can it cause?
Imitating the way how popular figures dress and behave is more common nowadays. Indeed, it has become a global trend among youth. This particular phenomenon happens due to several reasons and normally remains popular for just a couple of years. What matters is that if it lasts for a longer period of time, there might be some problems as a result.
The massive exposure of artists on TV and certain social media such as Instagram and Twitter has led to their great popularity in societies especially among youth. This phenomenon is augmented by the existence of public influencers who have thousands or even millions of followers on online platforms such as YouTube and Instagram where viewers can easily share their content and earn money. The more massive the shares, the faster they get viral. These facts are responsible for why young people are imitating how their idols dress and behave lately. Thus, it is hard to avoid youth from being exposed to and participating in the wave of following the ones whom they admire.
Normally, a certain global trend lasts for just a couple of years before another one comes and replaces it. In some points, this case somehow has stimulated a stronger demand for any products related to celebrities. On the one hand, this means that the economic sector will probably develop and benefit some stakeholders such as the clothing and entertainment industries. On the other hand, if the trend continues, it is alarming that this might lead to the practice of consumptive habits and neglect of the home-country culture. The best illustration of this is the global K-Pop phenomenon that has triggered the demand for Korean clothing, food, and even behaviour and made youth popularize them through online media more than they do for the same things from their country of origin.
Although making self to be like specific famous figures by practicing their clothing style and behaviour is everyone’s right and might be advantageous for some people, at some points, this can be a worrying problem and lead to more serious threats to shopping habits and the popularity of certain cultures of an origin country.
356 words, Mr. Dion.
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